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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

eye saw a love" one eye couldn,t taste' eye saw a dream from wich eye can,t awake... my life is a trip" a glass of milk can,t fix' eye need a break how long will this take... twelve hours" forever" eye don,t really care' cause here"... eye am a man' not aware... 4pace is deciet" eye dream without sleep" how long am eye awake"/ how much did eye take"/ are you really here"/ fuck it... eye dont care... you make me feel so good' eye,d take you anywhere... my soul lives on forever' with you it's just a day' eye'll take you as you cum... forever and a day.

logun2002ya 30-Oct-02/4:13 PM
who the fuck is cummings?




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