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Ambient (Free verse) by renwick
Handy wavy Fish by legs and a Indian And a Kracken Ambien thought patterns Brains are smearing into plastic love. Giant beetles (or are they the Beatles) Trim the hedges and dances on three green Shattered sidewalk love. Infinity wood How to examine the internal organs of a piece of wood Dill a hole though it Just drills A hole You can???t See you see right through. (sounds heard form across the room) Everything is made of hair My hands this chair It is wrapped all over Drowning in crazy hair That fucker fucked the girl from Sister Soliel I???m glad I sold their album. I???m seeing sparkles over everything and leaves and clouds as pattern I observed nothing in that nothing is something. I???ve been absorbed by sound into the video screen and my hands have become tree???s with parrot beaks. No freedom is the true freedom What the Robot dancing hats. Incredible insanity making medicine- makes you dream while you are aren?? ?t asleep. I cannot control my sides or my hands . Giant crazy rooster with drawn on eyes. You are the crash symbol. Three distinct minds now- one is old one is young and one is a criminal but not against the crimes. Is it moral then- yep I believe it is. What if you believe you won???t exist. A world inside your head- this is gonna be nuts- I just saw a nut cracker run quickly by my head. Perhaps sleeps are needed/ I love amy/ I love michelle/ I love Pepper/ and MY family/ and Rob and Orie. When the pages dance out of all MY books I still love you all. Must sleep I???m dreaming while I???m awake and dracula is right behind me??? no it???s just VNV notion. Boo enough isn???t it. waking life was so beautiful to look at reminds me of a time I stepped clearly in the moonlight and the fire dances around my eyes and my pant legs as leaved of the bright kingdom of the fall. The season of resurrection along dance forth as the night runs up your porch It delivers everything with ease becomes light and flows into the tunnel see the animals of the invisible kingdom- they are not the magic eye that I can???t see devisive mintrick that???s how so many are I forget the beginning Did loving specters? Soooo cold. I???m sorry Mr.Computer man I???m not sure where the papers are going. Hell fish and red packaging surround their robot nature. Nurture has no effect on Robots. Aaaaaaseumas pees on the couch. Woogie woogie wookus. This will look crazy tomorrow Spinning orbital cucumbers report back to us that their mission has failed . Oh pooh. My mouth is dry. So visual I can see. Where did Donald duck come from? Now to sleep. Typing is too muchsdkfhskjkrjt #Note: This poem was created with the aid of the sleep drug Ambien TM

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6
Weighted score: 4.713913
Overall Rank: 11945
Posted: September 15, 2002 9:57 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2002 9:57 PM PDT
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[3] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Sep-02/8:32 AM | Reply
next time try robitussen and sominex, and lay off the keyboard. it is not your friend. oh, and, drugs are bad, mmmkay?
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