regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-02/5:32 PM
very negative... i might give it a higher score if i was more into the style of it
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	26-Oct-02/5:38 PM
not exactly a haiku but i guess it works...
Re: A Well Worth Wait by savannah	27-Oct-02/5:21 AM
good content but could use more of a rythmic feel
Re: Meaning........ by Hispanic_gurl2004	27-Oct-02/5:32 AM
a lot of thought into it, but it culd use a little structure work, but since its just basic free verse its ok
Re: Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit	27-Oct-02/5:34 AM
i like the general concept of it and it flows rather well
Re: Gone by Katie2	27-Mar-03/8:35 AM
I've been there, good job on showing your feelings, but i agree it could use more imagery. Try to make the reader feel the pain, dont just describe it.