Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	11-Nov-02/2:58 AM
I've been told by Blade to support him on this one. Its true though, there isn't enough respect for one anothers work. Maybe we don't like it for one reason or another but its only an opinion and no-one can prove an opinion right or wrong. Ever. But yeah, go Blade. (You've mad her all self-defensive now with that ridiculously long numbered comment. Keep it up!)
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	11-Nov-02/3:01 AM
When the dad comes does he actually 'come'? That makes it more meaningful probably.
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	11-Nov-02/3:08 AM
Excellent. How can this not get 10s across the board? This must have taken ages to write but its well worth it.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Nov-02/5:46 AM
Excellent. 'Honey, one of my nipples came off' 'Good God, a mans nipples don't just come of!' 'not true, depends what kind of pliers you use.'
Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird	13-Nov-02/2:39 AM
Very good, I'm thinking incompetent yanks are to blame. Theres a story behind this. Do tell us some day.
Re: Surreal... by Yardbird	13-Nov-02/2:40 AM
An excellent sonnet. Just like the great bards, 'tis indecipherable and incomprehensable. Well done.
Re: Sod by jrtails	18-Nov-02/1:07 AM
Excellent. Simple is best. Good meaning. Gives interaction with the reader in that it can apply to them and also the huge amount of comments I should imagine are coming your way.(That wasn't like a sinister warning though.)
Re: A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke	18-Nov-02/1:08 AM
Excellent. I love innane fun poems.
Re: Football by Tom Colebrooke	18-Nov-02/1:10 AM
A A Milne is spinning in his grave, Back then football was for the rough lower classes. But I reckon I can see your point. I too like football, but compare it to tubs of cheap margarine! Hmmmmmmmmm, Stork.
Re: Few Words by Tom Colebrooke	18-Nov-02/1:11 AM
Fraid not old chap. Damm matrons tied me up stripped naked in the boiler room. Bet you went to a public school now eh! Oh hello matron. Gosh those stockings look nice on you!
Re: I Cry by casey	18-Nov-02/1:14 AM
Very emotionally wrought. And optimisim too, I like optimisim in a poem. Too many people think a poem has to be all depressing and sad to be hard hitting, but you prove it doesn't.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/1:15 AM
An excellent moral tale. A new hillaire belloc perhaps?
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/1:16 AM
Where do sausage rolls feature in this?
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/1:19 AM
Douglas Adams would be proud! Hillariously funny. Whats the last thing that goe through a flies head as it hits the windscreen? Its arse.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/2:55 AM
Twat. You're the reason some jews still live in fear.
Re: The Washing by strider1	18-Nov-02/2:58 AM
I think this is discrminiatory to all washing machines everywhere, will tumble driers be next? For gods sake is it that bad?
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-02/2:29 AM
You should make this into a song, it has real blues potential!
Re: Slow death by Blade	19-Nov-02/2:35 AM
I think this is bloody brilliant! Especially as I had most input, didn't I blade? Why did you not recognize my worth and add my name somewhere? Inthe title would be nice. And the alternative title should be 'A long fall'. 10
Re: Damn you, Mary Poppins... by Yardbird	22-Nov-02/5:44 AM
This works well, methinks.
Re: Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird	22-Nov-02/5:54 AM
Hahahahaha, I know the problem, Dr. Spankenwissenschaften!