Re: a comment on Hero Within a Mother by confuzdlilgirl	25-Nov-02/8:02 AM
it is one about my mom, was it not obvoius enough?
Re: a comment on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl	22-Nov-02/3:36 PM
whne you wrote that you seemed to know nothin of what you were talking about and making a joke of it all. my mom had cancer. i have seen it all. it wasnt easy nor was it something everyoen can understand til it happens. WTF does that have to do with my poetry?? how i comment on it effects how u do me?? i hope im taking this all the wrong way, else you're just not even a person inside.
Re: a comment on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl	22-Nov-02/3:34 PM
sorry i just dont get why everyone that says something its usually negative. maybe you all are right i cant write, but it doesnt mean im going to stop. we studied a guys poetry today in english. he said that a good poem is one that reveals the truth.. that is what i do. they may not make sense nor have correct grammar, but if you get the message and relate isn't that all that matters?
Re: a comment on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl	22-Nov-02/3:29 PM
yea this sonnet was really hard to write. it doesnt make sense liek the general idea is hard to get i know, but we had certian rules we had to write by. and it was hard to write it in IP.
Re: a comment on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl	20-Nov-02/3:06 PM
what is there that i dont know?? who are you to judge on a friendship you seem to know nothing about except that is in here. I like for people critique the writing style and rhyme verse meter ok but the feelings you know nothing of. You dont know me your making false jusgement here. i think there you dont know what you're talking about for its of me and my friend. in which you know nothing but what i have told you.
Re: a comment on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl	20-Nov-02/3:00 PM
asking just to improve but how is it bumy if its put in IP. we had ot have it in that form for the assignment. what do u mean by incoherent? please explain more. thankyou
Re: a comment on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl	19-Nov-02/4:22 PM
Well i think really you dont know how to read poetry. IF you are talking about the second stanza and i could be wrong it just means though good times and hard. You seem to critic and say im bad at many of my writings. i used to believe you. thought i dont care anymore. now if there are things you dont get or think something i need to improve on please tell me. this is why i stayed i want to improve to be better because even if im not doing well i think i atleast show promise if im only shown my mistakes and not just struck down. how else do you expect me to improve? or do u not care for me too perhaps?? hmmm...
Re: a comment on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl	19-Nov-02/4:13 PM
THis sonnet i wrote for english. we were assigned to compare love to something and modernize it into our version of SHALL I COMPARE THEE TO A SUMMER'S DAY. i thought well he talks of eternal love but people these days always say they are in love then find that it was just a crush. many didnt get it, just a general idea. im just kinda speaking from where i like someone a lot in the beginning but it lasts only a while but i never say that im in love because i know it takes more. though some people say they are after only a week. and that is just not true, it takes more im my opinion.
Re: a comment on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl	5-Nov-02/7:16 PM
what do you mean walk with us. sorry im not very good at these hidden message things. what does emotionally saturated mean??
Re: a comment on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl	5-Nov-02/7:14 PM
I dont really get that comment but thats ok. this poem though you should know is not about me. its about a friend. wrote it to make her feel better. but thanx or the rating!!
Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit	19-Oct-02/6:53 PM
worded well, but i dont think it even comes close to the real thing. my mother had cancer just this past summer. it is worse then you write. maybe it would be better if you really knew what you were talking about!
Re: The TRust That Was Unreal by wootness	3-Oct-02/8:29 PM
awesome poem!! its easy to relate and made so its not completely personal but justified to fit almost anyone!! in same place right now!!