Re: Car Crashes by poemwanker	22-Oct-07/12:42 AM
I like where you're going with this poem. Just a few minor adjustments and this would be good.
Re: On The Gay Beach by Edna Sweetlove	22-Oct-07/12:47 AM
Exquisitely homoerotic material Edna. I can just envision the semen dripping down your chin. Hahahaha. Hope you enjoy your romps down there in queerville.
Re: On The Gay Beach by Edna Sweetlove	22-Oct-07/12:49 AM
Uh , I mean Poofy Pete. You go girl!
Re: Be The One by forsaken	22-Oct-07/12:54 AM
Wow, this is pretty bad. How old are you? Check out my poem ....it's much more sophisticated. It's a true love story with about a lady friend.
Re: HATE by forsaken'sbigbro	22-Oct-07/12:58 AM
This is better than alot of the other shit I've been reading on this site. I think if you work on some of the lines you could improve this quite a bit. I like your honesty and openness.
Re: Head On by Bachus	22-Oct-07/1:03 AM
It looks like this may be an intelligent poem...I can't tell. I'll have to rate and review it at another time so that I can give a fair assessment.
Re: Drug Dealer by Bazilla	22-Oct-07/1:09 AM
You should change the title to Day Tripper...I think you would sell a few records that way.