| Re: a comment on Ionic Winter by david |
2-Nov-02/8:24 PM |
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Find a summer girl, hmm? You make it sound so simple. ;-)
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| Re: constructed word poem #6 by david |
26-Aug-02/12:05 PM |
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I can imagine it would. You don't necessarily have to audibly respond to something in order to have hesitation. Can someone not hesitate to commit an action (conceivably, when there's nobody around to talk to)?
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| Re: silence of the sky by david |
13-Aug-02/11:35 PM |
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Curious that you should mention David Hume; I recently (re-)read his essay 'Of the Standard of Good Taste'. He was a smart cookie, but as for the nonsense of him being the greatest philosopher to have written in the English language, it's a big stretch IMO.
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| Re: you are the bell and i am the dog by silvertongueddevil |
11-May-02/12:17 PM |
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The metaphor put forth in the opening line sounds contrived and too forthward to fit with the language of the rest of the piece. I'd suggest omitting the first line altogether.
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| Re: For settle by gothwalk |
11-May-02/11:44 AM |
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