| Re: a comment on Haven by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/7:29 PM |
Do you have a degree in anything creative related?
Nope, didn't think so.
You officially have no leg to stand on.
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| Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina |
16-Nov-05/7:27 PM |
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"Ah'm black and Ah'm proud"
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| Re: Sienna by oneglove |
16-Nov-05/11:02 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Haven by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/10:57 AM |
You pretty much explained his comment without even knowing it.
You're saying to yourself, "What's he talking about?" Of course you are.
Let me show you.
cyan9, If you are going to leave poems like this, please save your energy,(. It) it shows quite a degree of disregard and emotional underdevelopement to see it (your poetry) as a dictionary of words rather than to view and experience the sensations of the scene unfolding. As for being formatted by a post-prime Billy Corgan, this means it's (your poem's) of no value or use, and looks like you are trying to sound more intelligent than you are. I appreciate the fact that you are giving by posting your poems (which is one better than most people) but please have a think about what you are giving. This poem has served no use to me, and has caused very mild offense,(.) what was the point?
Don't worry cyan9. You'll still win the argument because like Jason Voorhees you just won't stop hacking away and die already.
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| Re: a comment on Aurora by Aetius |
16-Nov-05/10:25 AM |
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I could if you'd post it.
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| Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/10:17 AM |
Awwww. Have we so quickly resorted to name calling? Don't worry, you are so much better at insulting yourself with your inept ability to write a proper sentence with at least a seventh grade grasp of punctuation and capitalization. Congrats for spelling guess right this time.
Sure, we could run this thing into the ground but I've done this before with far wiser than you. Quite frankly, You have issues and nothing I can say or do is going to solve them or likely shut your ass up. So I'm taking the high road and conceding all arguments between us officially won by cyan9.
Are you happy now?
Nope, didn't think so.
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| Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/9:52 AM |
Proper punctuation might help a little too. Try one of these (:) or ("") or just drop the damn period.
What do I think of your poem? It's not bad in an acid trip kind of way. You seem to portray the operating table as the dream and the nature scene as the world you wake up to. If that was your intent then good job. The average person would have gone the opposite route.
"one bright one light"???
In the future if you choose to make your biting comments then at least check it for faults. Nothing makes you appear to need a slightly more intelligence than a snide reply full of errors.
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| Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/9:00 AM |
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And yet you still fail to.
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| Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina |
16-Nov-05/7:50 AM |
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LOL! That's one of the best comments I've heard here in a while.
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| Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina |
16-Nov-05/7:45 AM |
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He'll probably just get himself boycotted.
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| Re: Aurora by Aetius |
16-Nov-05/7:40 AM |
Good one.
Did you know that your list of poems in your homepage form the acrostic "ASS. U C IT?
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| Re: a comment on After Fighting (More Blood Edit) by zodiac |
16-Nov-05/7:31 AM |
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Grasshopper finally snatches a pebble from the master's hand.
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| Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/7:21 AM |
I was thinking mockery:
"No nothing like." A very poor sentence, I'm geussing without education.
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| Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/7:17 AM |
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No but that's fucking hilarious.
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| Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW |
16-Nov-05/7:10 AM |
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Shit! You'll have to copy and paste into your addrees bar and enter it. The link don't work.
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| Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW |
16-Nov-05/7:07 AM |
Now I remember why I didn't bother seeing it again. They might as well have just turned to the audiance and flipped us the bird.
This reminds me of a joke. It's near the bottom of the page at this link. It's called The pink and purple polka dotted ping pong ball. You'll recognize it as a big block of text. Make sure you read every word of it slowly and carefully. Enjoy.
http://www.circleofbastards.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic;f=1;t=001775
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| Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 |
16-Nov-05/6:47 AM |
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This is an easy one Zodiac.
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| Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW |
16-Nov-05/6:38 AM |
Here's my Dovina answer: I believe it was a serious satire.
My answer: It's been a long time since I've seen it. Honestly all I can remember is Mimi's tits. Everything else I remember from the movie are scenes from The Seventh Sign.
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| Re: a comment on When Did You Walk Away? by TLRufener |
16-Nov-05/6:20 AM |
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Yeah exactly like what precisely does make your shower curtain suck in when you turn on the shower? This topic has been debated by people with real scientific degrees. Apparently nobody has gotten the funding yet to do the appropriate tests.
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| Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina |
15-Nov-05/4:48 PM |
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Could you reword that? Do you mean most agree race isn't real or that most disagree with each other.
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