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Sienna (Free verse) by oneglove Dance, dance
Delicately down
Twisting to the seasons song
Dressed for the ball
Softly you fall
Keeping time âtil winterâs waltz
Up the ladder:
Ruler of My World
Down the ladder:
Acrylic Sunrise
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Posted: November 15, 2005 10:24 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2005 10:24 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0715218 Overall Rank: 6611 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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16-Nov-05/11:02 AM
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Thanks.
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oneglove @ 24.171.9.144
> ALChemy
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16-Nov-05/2:13 PM
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wow, thank you.
Softly sings of seasons, as if ladies twirling around in a dance and changing partners (that of winter and fall). Enjoyed this!
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