regarding some deleted poem...	31-Dec-02/10:10 PM
I have a slight problem with this: it tells us nothing we didn't know already,
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Dec-02/10:11 PM
Except for the bit about you. Which I highly, highly doubt.
Re: Haffner's Mill by powerline	31-Dec-02/10:17 PM
Nice idea, badly done.
Re: One by adrenalize	14-Jan-03/7:37 PM
Oh shut up.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jan-03/7:40 PM
Get rid of the exclamation mark. Otherwise lovely.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jan-03/7:41 PM
You keep writing things I wish I'd written. Stop it, damn you. Again, shades upon shades of Guillevic.
Re: Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin	15-Jan-03/10:08 AM
You are a sick sick sick little girl. On the other hand, as we all know, that's why I loves you. I don't think this is my favourite set, but lovely nonetheless. (Well... lovely... you know what I mean.)
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jan-03/8:55 AM
Damn. There we go writing the same thing again. How is it that we both put up a poem involving little Red Riding Hood at the time? All that aside, this is quite damn good.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jan-03/11:03 AM
You're -=Dark_Angel=- playing a joke on us, aren't you? Aren't you?
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jan-03/4:48 AM
Dare I ask what about Ethiopian cuisine makes you go hmm?
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jan-03/4:56 AM
Ah. Yes. As you said, better. Still and again, change line 6. Liked your idea for it -- the name should be a two syllable one, that line really needs eleven feet as opposed to the niine it has. It really breaks the flow as it is. But then you know that...
Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	20-Jan-03/5:07 AM
Indeed. Excellent. Full prawnes ahead, I say!
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jan-03/8:51 PM
'The sky, rebelling against its native blue/Turns Confederate' is one of the most wonderful ways of describing a grey sky I've ever seen -- though you'd have to be American or have a knowledge of the civil war to get it. I'm not too sure about the rest, though.
Re: Things by Quarton	21-Jan-03/10:02 AM
The poem is quite good. However, get off your damn guilt trip about the fact that we heved and fought our way to the top of the pile. Do you really think that is the sabre-toothed tiger had come to take over the world instead of us, they'd really try and treat us well? Dammit, they lost. And we won. Too bad for them. Now serve me my steak -- rare, please.
Re: An Anthem for Peace by dougsoderstrom	21-Jan-03/10:36 AM
For God's sake, man -- no matter how admirable the sentiment may be, even as rhetoric this is godawful
Re: Listen For Once by Sarahmarie	21-Jan-03/7:42 PM
Why am I so happy I decided to get a glass of Scotch before coming on here?
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jan-03/8:10 PM
You must have edited this since last I spoke on it. Still something of a pity about the angels, but speaking of 'charred angels' is magnificent.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jan-03/8:14 PM
Zephyr seems out of place, but giving Eden moors makes up for it.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jan-03/8:25 PM
As you've been told before, never forget Verlaine's words -- 'One says sodoMITE, Your Honour'. The last two lines of the penultimate stanza don't work.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jan-03/7:10 PM
I'd really rather not.