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regarding some deleted poem... 4-Nov-04/2:09 PM
yo this poem is great and i like it.
Re: Snake (Yin) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Nov-04/2:16 PM
I only have shells
and rest is pittiful
to dream about this place

blah blah. whatever. this haiku is nice. but it sucks. is beautiful too. but it lacks the quality of nature. So i think is great. But really is bad and stupid.
Re: Bird (Yang) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-04/2:17 PM
Very nice. Good job.
Re: Cunt by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Nov-04/2:26 PM
"Casting men up mountains to moan
alone with one another under hood." what is this? a lost in denial. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. shits shits shits shits. stupider stupid. This poem is great. BUT I THINK IT STINKS AND FILTHY. DIRTY MIND. DAM !
Re: Pro Forma by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Nov-04/2:30 PM
A banboon fart across the moon
troubling the weaken world and it's core
our eyes gazed upon to fear

haiku haiku is nice. butyours make no sense at all. dream on poet dream on poet dream on.
Re: The Mushrooms' Song by zodiac 4-Nov-04/2:37 PM
good write
Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Nov-04/2:40 PM
aids aids you nothing about aids.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Nov-04/4:07 PM
"he was so plump and round
and i loved him from every angle,
and he was my march of time
my most effective line
he was my helplessness, my fear.
Queer how the snarl
on his lip endeared
right until the end,
and i have never known a lie
and i have never known a friend,
never nothing really
until this very moment
when, now i know it all, all, all
as free and sickening as the fall."

Get away with this gay shits. "Queer how snarl" what in the hell is this sucka shit?. losing your mind. lack of emotions. oh this one is not from the heart. is merely a soup opera for gay men. beautiful poem. this is great. dam anyway is a piece of loaded crap. make no sense at all. shot me if you can. I am poet iam poet.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Nov-04/4:08 PM
a flame whisper. is this an image of your style? oh the water is drinking from the eyes of the well.

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