poemranker ::Bird (Yang) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

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Haiku № 114776

Bird (Yang)

by <{Baba^Yaga}>

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Nov 2004 · 5 comments

Thank you for feathers And this perfect pair of eyes To mimic your fall.

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5 comments

[9] Dovina 2-Nov-04/8:14 PM Reply
A female-sounding thing, come from a ranker witch, amazing.
[10] zodiac › Dovina 3-Nov-04/12:46 AM Reply
Don't be so surprised. And horus is more woman than you are.
[9] Dovina › zodiac 3-Nov-04/1:43 PM Reply
He doesn't sound so, but of course you know.
[10] zodiac › Dovina 4-Nov-04/12:57 AM Reply
I do. Just type "vagina" into the search-o-mat. You'll get gems like this one:

http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=68450
[6] IcHronit 4-Nov-04/2:17 PM Reply
Very nice. Good job.