Re: The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom	23-Jul-04/12:52 PM
i'm sorry i have to go take a crap, now
Re: Girlz by liljsmith87	23-Jul-04/2:57 PM
it made me wince- i felt like it was written by an angry 13 year old with raging Jr.high hormones
Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos	23-Jul-04/3:06 PM
that bitch stole my wig.........
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jul-04/4:48 AM
i enjoyed the flow of this-it made me feel you had some actual life experience instead of someone pretending they do. those are feelings i have related to at a time in my own past. good show!
Re: A Mothers Heart by TAMARAG67	24-Jul-04/9:51 PM
thanks dan- its nice to know someone gets it
Re: Dirty Heaven by SupremeDreamer	25-Jul-04/12:47 PM
this reminds me of long-ago college weekends were I would wake up with a hangover to indulge myself in a breakfast of a cold bagel and an amaretto sour----thanks for the memories.
Re: abortion by darylchew	29-Aug-04/7:06 PM
powerful and haunting
Re: come with me by darylchew	29-Aug-04/7:15 PM
When can we leave? I'm packing a bag-
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-04/7:26 PM
Man,you must have REALLY been messed up the night before!
Re: Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	31-Aug-04/6:46 PM
My dear Dovina- let me jump upon the "soapbox" with you. Woman after my own heart-
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Aug-04/6:53 PM
Beautiful Dan- I feel passion and sadness in this piece