| Re: The Western World by mrpresident |
4-Jul-04/1:06 AM |
I really like this, it tells of someone who is stuck maybe in a dead end job and just ants to be free........
Wobderful............
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4-Jul-04/3:47 AM |
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I must say, the language from the previous commentor was uncalled for, although slightly overdone, I would say this has the potential if edited to be a really good poem.....................
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Jul-04/3:22 AM |
actually this is classed as a senryu, the haiku is specifically for nature related poems, same syllable count, also the syllable count on this is wrong, you have 6 in the first line, 8 in the second and 5 in the third,
traditional haiku is 5,7,5 although condensed haiku are very popular, sorry, but this is not a haiku
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| Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
5-Jul-04/7:20 AM |
A very interesting piece, a style I have not seen before, are we saying what we would like for dinner? hehehehe......... very funny.............
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5-Jul-04/2:09 PM |
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I love this, it seems to be the best of yours I have read on here so far
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Jul-04/2:08 PM |
I think the edit maybe could do with a little editing, still very nice
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| Re: Eros, and Psycho by horus8 |
14-Jul-04/2:10 PM |
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| Re: One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer |
14-Jul-04/2:12 PM |
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Liked this one................
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| Re: California triolets by zodiac |
30-Jul-04/4:54 PM |
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| Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000 |
30-Jul-04/4:55 PM |
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Hmmm interesting thoughts, bet I know where you were when you thought of this one.................
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| Re: Remember by psychedelic |
8-Aug-04/9:33 AM |
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