| Re: a comment on a casting is rescued by ay deee |
ay deee 204.90.50.252 |
12-Nov-05/2:45 PM |
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what do you dislike about carbonless?
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| Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.151.150.39 |
12-Nov-05/1:36 PM |
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That's one of the most patronising characterisations of a race I've ever seen. You have absolutely no idea what it means to see past a person's Negrality and treat them like a fucking adult. Not being racist entails slagging Negroes off exactly the same amount (down to the last insult) that you slag Normals off. I slag Normals off about once every 17 minutes. I slag Negroes off about once every 8 minutes. Therefore I'm a racist, especially when you take into account the fact that Negroes constitute a much smaller portion of the British population than Normals, and the fact that my golliwog msn messenger image constitutes a continuous, 24-hours-a-day insult to negroes everywhere.
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| Re: a comment on Headlines by Dovina |
Dovina 209.247.222.81 |
12-Nov-05/12:47 PM |
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I don't see how it relates to pandemonium or pandemic.
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| Re: a comment on The Hawk by Dovina |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
12-Nov-05/10:45 AM |
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Careful. I'm a married man.
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| Re: a comment on The Hawk by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
12-Nov-05/8:15 AM |
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"Lots of hits, but no comments". Kinda like road kill.
Needs a line or two to bridge the gap between time settings.
Some good images in here though.
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| Re: a comment on The Hawk by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
12-Nov-05/8:12 AM |
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Cool! Back to the future. Now if only I can go back in time in my Ford Pinto and get Zodiac and Dovina to kiss then the new messiah can be born to rid the world of republicans.
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| Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
12-Nov-05/6:00 AM |
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Yeah baby, yeah! Grooovy.
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| Re: a comment on Headlines by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
12-Nov-05/5:53 AM |
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So far the responses you've recieved are:
It's about the media.
It's about blame.
It's about prophacy.
I think you're closer to pandemonium than pandemic.
Try it from the perspective of a dog.
Dog's Diary by Fido (Ree rerse)
Day 1: I chased and killed a bird
Day 2: Wrestling with Master my bite got out of hand
Day 3: In the doghouse
Day 4: The Master has forgiven me
Day 5: The Master stays home
Day 6: The Master stays in bed
Day 7: The Master forgets to feed me
Day 8: The Master stays sleeping
Day 9: I think The Masters dead
And I know you could write it even better than I did.
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| Re: The Hawk by Dovina |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
12-Nov-05/1:39 AM |
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The present-past-present changes are a little off-putting.
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| Re: my you have a bubbly laugh by skaskowski |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
12-Nov-05/1:37 AM |
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I like warbly. The rest can go.
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| Re: drunken jill by calliope |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
12-Nov-05/1:35 AM |
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Not as good as the last one.
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| Re: The Hawk by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
11-Nov-05/4:20 PM |
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Lots of hits, but no comments, the first time around. A few changes, and another try.
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| Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
11-Nov-05/2:40 PM |
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Or better:
ungainly beak,
hard, uncomfortable,
finds dayâs end rest,
thrust in bush-clad crevice,
twixt wing and breast.
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| Re: a comment on Headlines by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
11-Nov-05/12:29 PM |
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Yes, itâs a pathetic prophecy, and really, itâs one of the possible outcomes. The virus mutates so rapidly that even though billions of doses of vaccine might be ready, a new mutation could wipe out millions of people before a suitable vaccine comes online. But my purpose in writing this is not to play Prophet. Itâs to look at the way people think about pandemic, like the flu that came during WWI and killed more people than the war did.
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| Re: a comment on trully, madly, deeply by Blindpoetry |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
11-Nov-05/8:51 AM |
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Damn Muslim servers will do it to ya every time.
Love is surrender. This is why you're incapable.
Maybe some Viagra might help?
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| Re: a comment on trully, madly, deeply by Blindpoetry |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
11-Nov-05/8:28 AM |
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Crap. We've finally repeated the word prostitute too many times for me to upload "I LOVE A PROSTITUTE", so here are my answers:
1) I wouldn't call a poem about my wife "I Love an 8-year-old Girl", obviously. If I had an 8-year-old daughter I would love to love her, but I'm afraid my faithlessness and cynicism have made me entirely incapable of love. The irony is Dovina warned me this would happen.
2) The New Testament Marys are Mother of God, Sister of Lazarus and Martha, and the one who found out the tomb was empty. The woman taken in adultery (note-not necessarily a prositute) isn't named, but confuted with the second two Marys by tradition (as are Mary sister of Lazarus and Mary at the Tomb). It's all rather boring and covered at too much length by the ass-ugly so-called novel, The Da Vinci Code.
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| Re: a comment on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
11-Nov-05/7:55 AM |
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| Re: a comment on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
11-Nov-05/7:47 AM |
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You don't love an 8 year old girl?! This will explain why when you have a daughter she will grow up to be a prostitute and Mascara-wait no-Basketball-Ah what ever the fuck his name is! will fall madly in love with her (probably while she's snowballing him). And all because you didn't love her you heartless bastard. :~(
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| Re: a comment on phases of futility... by Bhaskaryya |
Bhaskaryya 202.63.190.227 |
11-Nov-05/7:34 AM |
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My appetite inclines towards 'strawberrish' or 'chocolatish'! (self-made words, mind you!)
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| Re: a comment on trully, madly, deeply by Blindpoetry |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
11-Nov-05/7:33 AM |
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He's saved from copywrite violations because he can't spell "truly" (unless he meant to put the word "trull" in. Then he's just saying she's a whore, which would give him something in common with the young poet posted beneath me).
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