CommentsComments 14501–14520 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

ALChemy on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 4:19 PM
Man's greatest folly is that he's forgot how to think beyond language.
ALChemy replying on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 4:14 PM
"<~> always jumps my -but- so I'm gonna jump yours." This is how sexual abuse is passed down.
INTRANSIT replying on Headlines by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 4:13 PM
I thought that too. then I read a hedline in the Milwaukee journal that suggested there is some kind of defence in saurkraut. not kidding.
INTRANSIT replying on Headlines by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 4:11 PM
one that I'd pay for, too.
INTRANSIT on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 3:56 PM
Lose the howling , keep the howl. Describe the "rank" scent. "like pebbles, city deep" <~> always jumps my -but- so I'm gonna jump yours. Lose it!
ALChemy replying on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 3:44 PM
Besides,it's a small price to pay to rid the world of republicans.
ALChemy replying on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 3:42 PM
Don't they allow bigamy over there?
ALChemy replying on Headlines by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 3:34 PM
Sorry, my bad. What I meant to say is your poem is more Panda like.
ay deee replying on a casting is rescued by ay deee 12 Nov 2005, 2:48 PM
an awfully dramatic safety manual. I work as a sculptor in an old mechanical engineering building, circa late 1800s i think. 1930s would work too. it was one of the first buildings around here, and i don't think much maintainance has been done on the place over all. a sort of wierd inspiration in itself...
ay deee replying on a casting is rescued by ay deee 12 Nov 2005, 2:45 PM
what do you dislike about carbonless?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Racism by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 1:36 PM
That's one of the most patronising characterisations of a race I've ever seen. You have absolutely no idea what it means to see past a person's Negrality and treat them like a fucking adult. Not being racist entails slagging Negroes off exactly the same amount (down to the last insult) that you slag Normals off. I slag Normals off about once every 17 minutes. I slag Negroes off about once every 8 minutes. Therefore I'm a racist, especially when you take into account the fact that Negroes constitute a much smaller portion of the British population than Normals, and the fact that my golliwog msn messenger image constitutes a continuous, 24-hours-a-day insult to negroes everywhere.
Dovina replying on Headlines by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 12:47 PM
I don't see how it relates to pandemonium or pandemic.
zodiac replying on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 10:45 AM
Careful. I'm a married man.
ALChemy replying on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 8:15 AM
"Lots of hits, but no comments". Kinda like road kill. Needs a line or two to bridge the gap between time settings. Some good images in here though.
ALChemy replying on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 8:12 AM
Cool! Back to the future. Now if only I can go back in time in my Ford Pinto and get Zodiac and Dovina to kiss then the new messiah can be born to rid the world of republicans.
ALChemy replying on Posted Pelicans by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 6:00 AM
Yeah baby, yeah! Grooovy.
ALChemy replying on Headlines by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 5:53 AM
So far the responses you've recieved are: It's about the media. It's about blame. It's about prophacy. I think you're closer to pandemonium than pandemic. Try it from the perspective of a dog. Dog's Diary by Fido (Ree rerse) Day 1: I chased and killed a bird Day 2: Wrestling with Master my bite got out of hand Day 3: In the doghouse Day 4: The Master has forgiven me Day 5: The Master stays home Day 6: The Master stays in bed Day 7: The Master forgets to feed me Day 8: The Master stays sleeping Day 9: I think The Masters dead And I know you could write it even better than I did.
zodiac on The Hawk by Dovina 12 Nov 2005, 1:39 AM
The present-past-present changes are a little off-putting.
zodiac on my you have a bubbly laugh by skaskowski 12 Nov 2005, 1:37 AM
I like warbly. The rest can go.
zodiac on drunken jill by calliope 12 Nov 2005, 1:35 AM
Not as good as the last one.