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my you have a bubbly laugh (Free verse) by skaskowski remember how i told you
how you looked through the bottom
of a glass of rum and coke?
a little warbly,
a little dirty.
much more accurately seen.
Up the ladder:
Do you fit in-to the dark?
Down the ladder:
The Final Night
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Posted: November 11, 2005 11:50 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2005 11:50 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8588 Comments:
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zodiac @ 217.144.7.195
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12-Nov-05/1:37 AM
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I like warbly. The rest can go.
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skaskowski @ 70.225.166.245
> zodiac
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13-Nov-05/2:32 AM
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so much for context, eh?
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