CommentsComments 13881–13900 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

wilco replying on Low by wilco 28 Nov 2005, 2:24 PM
No, I'm not looking for low votes and the experiment is simply working on not discarding something that sounds good in a song simply because the lyrics aren't my best.
wilco on Indian Song by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 2:21 PM
Wild man, bled in my vanities; My graven ancient, increase mass homicide. So little left of you to resurrect for you. Wild man God interred his head. I dunno...best I could come up with. 9 for making me think...I'd give you a 10 but you made me think and that pissed me off. ;)
ALChemy replying on Indian Song by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 12:19 PM
Boy, Zodiac's gonna have no competition on this one. Try doubling up the syllables in some of the words by doubling the vowel sounds. Wildman= Wi/i/i/ld/man= Why/ high/ eye/ old/ man. See? It's suppose to force you to read it the way it would sound if it were sung to generic indian music.
ALChemy replying on Indian Song by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 12:10 PM
That's the best interpretation of the undecoded version of cryptic poem I've ever read. You know I do miss the old fart. Him and Bethy. She's somewhere singing to the robins in the trees and he's throwing his rock sculptures at them.
ALChemy replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 28 Nov 2005, 11:59 AM
No. The legacy of Da Vinci and Jesus have endured some pretty outrageous blasphemy and from what I've read and seen in documentaries I'd say The Da Vinci Code falls somewhere near the credibility of Hudson Hawk. I hear the movie's coming out anyway. So for entertainment purposes it might be worthwhile. As far as Mary Magdalene goes I think it could be any one of the many theories of who she really was, but the reason I linked you is because this is testament supposedly written by a woman. I like the idea of an equal oppertunity Jesus. I think all women should read this even if only for the sense of validation in the bible.
INTRANSIT replying on Indian Song by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 11:56 AM
Perhaps if we all stand in a circle and hold hands chanting this, rockmage might come back.
Dovina replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 28 Nov 2005, 11:30 AM
Thank you. Such finds are interesting. Have you read The Da Vince Code?
Dovina replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 28 Nov 2005, 11:26 AM
You have related the ideas of colossal stupidity and somebody wanting to sleep with somebody. Judge's ruling: Associative dimness.
Dovina replying on Indian Song by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 11:18 AM
Okay, done that. Draws a blank.
Dovina replying on Low by wilco 28 Nov 2005, 11:14 AM
A sad mans drinking song, not so experamental really. I guess you're looking for low votes, sorry, I hate to please.
Dovina replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 28 Nov 2005, 10:59 AM
No, he’s saying that it’s not funny (i.e. sad) that no part of this conversation has any connection to his life and that all he sees in our talk is that men think women are pigs and women think men are pigs. It truly is sad. We must have the decency to provoke him no further on this sensitive issue.
ALChemy replying on The mountain has come to Mohammed by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 7:23 AM
About the movie: If it's any consolation, I'd download it off Kazaa and watch it.
ALChemy replying on Indian Song by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 7:19 AM
You're on track. L4 is the weakest by far. If your interpretation sounds better than the original then I may lie and adopt it as my own.
ALChemy replying on The mountain has come to Mohammed by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 6:50 AM
Did you read the lyrics? Have you seen the show? It's about a weakling who suddenly has superpowers thrusted on to him and he has no idea what to do with them. It's a comedy. It ends with "believe it or not it's just me". I was trying to say he's not a superhero but has been forced into being portrayed as one. I didn't mean to break a golden rule. Just thought you'd get a chuckle out of it.
ALChemy replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 28 Nov 2005, 6:37 AM
You do realize you're saying you understand what goes on in Dovina's mind and more importantly you're not disgusted.
zodiac replying on The mountain has come to Mohammed by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 6:35 AM
I'm going to call myself Sofia Coppola and the movie Lost in Translation with scary foreigners instead of cute Japanese ones and nobody as lovely as Scarlett Johanssen. God knows it'll flop for exactly that reason. Disqualified. I'm tired of anything heroic being a metaphor for Jesus. Heroic things seem to be metaphors for Jesus because Jesus himself is a metaphor for heroic things.
ALChemy replying on The mountain has come to Mohammed by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 6:24 AM
"The Islam movie is going to be pure visually-stunning plotless ensemble drama. Maybe unfortunately. ": Call it a satire and they'll proclaim you "the ultimate supernatural hero" genius. Here's the greatest poetry ever written about Jesus: http://www.lyricsondemand.com/tvthemes/thegreatestamericanherolyrics.html
zodiac replying on Indian Song by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 6:24 AM
After we've given everyone a chance, I'll post my interpretation and see how far off it is. I've definitely got line 5, but now I'm worried about 6, which for me involved the unlikely word "resurrect".
ALChemy replying on The mountain has come to Mohammed by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 6:11 AM
I just realized Dovina is Anne Rice.
ALChemy replying on The mountain has come to Mohammed by ALChemy 28 Nov 2005, 6:06 AM
I think it must have something to do with NC. The bugs are huge here and you can't help but become fixated with them.