Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/4:17 PM
I have just given birth. test that for irony.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/4:10 PM
If only this site had an irony detector.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/3:38 PM
Yes, but for the glympse, the occasional light, the bang for the buck spent. Don't take anything on poemranker too literally.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/3:30 PM
That pretty much sums up life don't it.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/3:26 PM
No, really it's just not understanding what people mean most of the time and trying to sort it out.
Re: a comment on My Reason by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 137.139.194.24	23-Jan-06/3:22 PM
its both.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/3:22 PM
They must be aces when they pop into your head then.
Re: a comment on Gaze by AuntyM	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/3:21 PM
I agree with Alchemy here, and don't understand what you're getting at on the INTRANSIT poem.
Re: My Hand of god by drnick	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/3:19 PM
Is this what you say to your patients Doc? Yikes.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/3:16 PM
In a place where good means bad, and bad good, my one-liners are good.
Re: a comment on Gaze by AuntyM	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/3:13 PM
They say the best readers become the best writers. Good to have you on board AuntyM.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/3:10 PM
Your gettin' good with those one-liners D.
Re: a comment on Gaze by AuntyM	AuntyM 152.163.100.10	23-Jan-06/3:04 PM
I don't write much, but I do read...I shall look over some of yours.
Re: a comment on Temporary moments by Prince of Void	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/3:03 PM
Touche Mademoiselle Dovina, touche.
Re: a comment on On Golden Bond by jmalone	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/2:58 PM
This is similar in meaning to my last poem. What this isn't, is a prose poem. That's what I don't understand.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/2:54 PM
No, it's like she says, I am poerfect, and anyoine who thinks otherwise cah shtilk it.
Re: a comment on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	23-Jan-06/2:49 PM
You just need to understand that Dovina's votes are like dog years. If she gives you a 7 it's like a 9 in human votes.
Re: Temporary moments by Prince of Void	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/2:48 PM
I like the start of this, but it degrades as it goes on. Let me do a little alchemy: Deep inside the grieves of moments On early morning light of dawn Breaking upon the waves of sea Deep within the dream of me The path that led to show What time can sometimes bring That led to ruin and Empty moments flowing over past Rising, falling dying in me All this time I had what I couldn't see Beyond my senses, what I grieve Was to know why you are gone All l loved was you Still you … All this time what I have done... Was to draw you back again Waiting thorough a million tears This ocean of time can be something If only to see me now
Re: On Golden Bond by jmalone	Dovina 69.175.32.104	23-Jan-06/2:35 PM
The first two lines of Verse 2 are good, but I don't understand the last two.
Re: In praise of racism by INTRANSIT	AuntyM 152.163.100.6	23-Jan-06/2:32 PM
I like this one.