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My Hand of god

by drnick

Member since 2005 · Posted 22 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

Would you Could you Let me Touch you With my Hand of god? I would Free you Let you See who You thought You were not. I can Save you Just as They do Give you All you need. I'll protect You Resurrect You Be the Air you breathe.

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[8] ALChemy 23-Jan-06/8:09 AM Reply
It'd make a good lyric.
[10] Dovina 23-Jan-06/2:23 PM Reply
This is really good, and vindicates the one who I thought might be a psycho in your last poem. I especially like Verse 2 because it conveys in a very subtle way something I've heard said in very preachy texts and to less effect.
[8] ALChemy 23-Jan-06/3:19 PM Reply
Is this what you say to your patients Doc? Yikes.