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My Hand of god (Free verse) by drnick Would you
Could you
Let me
Touch you
With my
Hand of god?
I would
Free you
Let you
See who
You thought
You were not.
I can
Save you
Just as
They do
Give you
All you need.
I'll protect
You
Resurrect
You
Be the
Air you breathe.
Up the ladder:
dreams unheard
Down the ladder:
Ahkataka Akarnakuray
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Posted: January 22, 2006 9:09 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2006 9:09 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5877 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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23-Jan-06/8:09 AM
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It'd make a good lyric.
This is really good, and vindicates the one who I thought might be a psycho in your last poem. I especially like Verse 2 because it conveys in a very subtle way something I've heard said in very preachy texts and to less effect.
Is this what you say to your patients Doc? Yikes.
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