Re: a comment on Nights in the city of Godiva by Mr Pig	Dovina 12.72.36.48	5-Aug-06/9:22 AM
To Stephen Robins, it is pretentious to use any phrase, which is not colloquial in certain circles and seen by them as smutty, fantastic, and original. It cannot be expected that he will any day soon become articulate. Yet, it is possible that after a discipline of long evenings reading good literature, he might advance a step or two toward the tragic enchantments of CLS.
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Dovina 12.72.36.48	5-Aug-06/8:36 AM
To answer your question, we do not write poems about the atrocities of radical Islam because we are all bleeding liberals who oppose Bush. To say that they are scum in need of obliteration is simply not politically correct. To say that it’s likely we have to kill ten innocent people in order to kill one scumbag is simply not acceptable. In my poem, should I write one, the number would be 100. it’s the way war has always gone.
Re: Children of Wolves by Caducus	Caducus 86.137.20.84	5-Aug-06/1:43 AM
Anyone read Birthday letters?
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	4-Aug-06/6:41 PM
Then why is it that nobody seems to mention such things in their poems. All we ever get is bleeding hearts saying oh those poor Iraq people who danced in the street with joy on 9/11 and during the London bombings. Here's a newsflash: Countries do evil things to each other all the time. Why is it you wine more about our country more than yours? Americans never complain alot about any other country than their own. Maybe you just secretly want to be American. That's the stupidest metaphor mixed or not that I've ever heard.
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 81.179.69.2	4-Aug-06/12:26 PM
Thank you, dear multiple personality nerd.
Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33	oneglove 198.99.250.82	4-Aug-06/6:44 AM
go on girl, i like reading this in a whispery voice like i'm in nkotb
Re: a comment on Paradise by oneglove	oneglove 198.99.250.82	4-Aug-06/5:54 AM
i really need to spell check everything i write
Re: Paradise by oneglove	oneglove 198.99.250.82	4-Aug-06/5:42 AM
i suppose i will explain this poem a bit, it was inspired by On the Road. As a nod to the book it was written stream of conscience and the last line and some of the imagery about the eyes are from the book (it is also named after the narrator). i liked that after 300 pages of traveling sal falls in love and settles down in a couple sentences. so this was an exploration of that moment, a revision would almost definitely help it because it was written so quickly, and sorry for misspelling manhattan.
Re: a comment on I wish I was a chav by Stephen Robins	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-Aug-06/3:31 AM
I should say more of post-death Martin Luther-King. The colour really drains out of those big blubbery cheeks.
Re: On the subject of being poor by Stephen Robins	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-Aug-06/1:15 AM
Craig Charles
Re: When Gravity Unmakes You by Enkidu	Dovina 70.38.78.229	3-Aug-06/5:07 PM
The gravity image seems awkward in this setting, since gravity would drop the person rapidly into the fire. And why would the devil object to the "game"? I'm voting 10 only to balance the obnoxious Edna.
Re: Paradise by oneglove	Dovina 70.38.78.229	3-Aug-06/5:03 PM
I found a glove along the road and wonder if it’s yours. It’s worn and soiled, but soft of leather and pliable when worn. Finding its mate would be like looking into eyes I never expect to meet, and would surely cause my legs to refuse to move. Though I might think, “beauty gazing down from above” I would not say it, for coyness’ sake. Nor would I agree so readily to madly love, when so much time remains to savor it. And I would spell it, “Manhattan.”
Re: A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Enkidu 172.191.51.24	3-Aug-06/4:44 PM
from Mac, Enk, and D. to you, Edna, this comes with love.
Re: a comment on When Gravity Unmakes You by Enkidu	Enkidu 172.191.51.24	3-Aug-06/4:42 PM
Something under your skin, Edna?
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.69.4	3-Aug-06/4:41 PM
No one with a brain in his or her head wonders why the USA is sticking its evil head into the Middle East cauldron. However (to mix metaphors) the birds may come home to roost and crap upon the USA in terms of 9/11 part 2.
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.69.4	3-Aug-06/4:40 PM
Thank you Mac. It's not a rant. It's horribly true.
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.69.4	3-Aug-06/4:39 PM
Chemical weapons are those funny things which nice military people send over to their enemies; you know, poison gas and stuff like that. And guess who sold them to Saddam. Yep! Uncle Sam-stein.
Re: a comment on Southern Baptist Redneck Song by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.69.4	3-Aug-06/4:37 PM
No it's fun. I'd like to see them swinging in the magnolia-scented breeze.
Re: When Gravity Unmakes You by Enkidu	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.69.4	3-Aug-06/4:35 PM
Total over-punctuated bollocks.
Re: a comment on A Night out With Chaucer by cleverdevice	cleverdevice 86.139.235.172	3-Aug-06/3:09 PM
Don't ask me where this came from.