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Crakyamuni on Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes 8 Feb 2005, 12:01 PM

I'm not sure about the reference to the time period, but I think socks have sentimental value for poets.

Crakyamuni replying on An intolerable rash brother by Crakyamuni 8 Feb 2005, 11:59 AM

Thanks for voting.

Dovina replying on Separation by Dovina 8 Feb 2005, 11:53 AM

From someone with an Arab-sounding name, that means something.

Dovina replying on Separation by Dovina 8 Feb 2005, 11:50 AM

You are fortunate not to be steeped enough in the Christian sects to get this. Funny, there were no Christian sects when Christ was here, no Buddhist sects when Buddha was here.

Dovina replying on Separation by Dovina 8 Feb 2005, 11:50 AM

You know your Bible, as did the girl Iâm writing about. The trouble started when she had only the Bible and the sermons without the caring that the Bible talks about.

poodietat on Ann & Dan & I by Goad 8 Feb 2005, 9:37 AM

hot

poodietat on Ann & Dan & I by Goad 8 Feb 2005, 9:20 AM

hot

poodietat on Ann & Dan & I by Goad 8 Feb 2005, 9:20 AM

hot

poodietat on Nuculer Power by MacFrantic 8 Feb 2005, 9:19 AM

i like the double-meaning of "rings": "fusion rings" and "rings like".

poodietat on Separation by Dovina 8 Feb 2005, 9:14 AM

Sorry, I don't get it. Most of the poem seemed as if the character is choosing among competing doctrine, then we find out she already has a fatherless son -- indicating she's already made a choice. Maybe I'm not steeped enough in christian sects to understand this.

poodietat replying on Sins of your father by poodietat 8 Feb 2005, 9:07 AM

Fair comment, good point.

Dovina on Winged Victory by REWellman 8 Feb 2005, 7:21 AM

From some story about an angel on a rock that I don't know. How we try to keep our stories in stone.

Dovina on Confusion by jroday 8 Feb 2005, 7:16 AM

Verse 4 is the way a lot of conversations go. Good description. There's no point in even talking when it goes like that. "Erects a sculpture from the brains of the lazy" is good too,

SupremeDreamer on Concerto Chaotic by thepinkbunnyofdoom 8 Feb 2005, 12:31 AM

Misspelled thighs. Bravo motherfucker.

SupremeDreamer on a scene in american ghetto by cowmoo 8 Feb 2005, 12:27 AM

I'd call this a very rough draft, with a very disappointing ending. Time to edit boy. Six.

sliver on The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry 7 Feb 2005, 10:41 PM

I am at a loss for words. I love the way you mixed it all up, And painted such a picture.

sliver on Back Off by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:32 PM

This one just feels kind of stilted, for lack of a better word. Maybe choppy, no. well, I ramble. Perhaps just a bit smoother? Or... maybe it's just me, what the hell do I know.

sliver on Provision by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:29 PM

Trapped in the same circle as the rest of us, I see. Welome to the other side of humanity.

sliver on Weary by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:26 PM

Yea, I feel it too. What can ya' do?

MacFrantic on Provision by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 7:34 PM

somewhat decent *8*