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<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 19 Jun 2004, 5:03 PM
Sounds like the Jungle Book.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 19 Jun 2004, 5:07 PM
I'm going to give you a 10 now in the hopes that you will feel obligated to purch'se the soundtrack to my life, my new album, "Fingerbanged". At record stores and outlet stores and coming to a pop a tent near YOU!
<{Baba^Yaga}> on What's Poetry by Sasha 19 Jun 2004, 5:12 PM
Bleef Bow'luon
SupremeDreamer on some deleted poem 19 Jun 2004, 5:58 PM
It starts out well, and unfolds nicely, but the ending left me feeling limp. Blessed with eight.
Dan garcia-Black on Army Dock (Bangcock in July) (Free Curse) by Rug by <{Baba^Yaga}> 19 Jun 2004, 7:51 PM
Did you mean "odd" instead of "queer"in the first line? Are the piss and shit references about the Asian SARS epidemic? I think the Bangcock in the title is self explanitory. Am I right? "Asswagon's blender," Daiquiris? Help! I'm trying to understand the "walk on the wild side." Lot's of strong images -8-
<{Baba^Yaga}> on A single day by donmiguel1960 19 Jun 2004, 9:06 PM
A blazing sling of poo.
DR Limerick on blob blob by MR Blobby 19 Jun 2004, 9:53 AM
ARE YOU THE REAL MR BLOBBY
DR Limerick on blobby blob by MR Blobby 19 Jun 2004, 9:55 AM
IS IT YOU MR BLOBBY?
richa on Phoebus by SupremeDreamer 19 Jun 2004, 11:57 AM
Sliver: 19jun04--9:10am 'no matter how hard we try, I'm a mutton shunter we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write'
richa on Phoebus by SupremeDreamer 19 Jun 2004, 12:04 PM
Like the first two verses in terms of their lyricism. And most of the rest of it, its just the parts of the poem 'revealing yourself' seems a bit removed. Especially verse three.
richa on some deleted poem 19 Jun 2004, 12:12 PM
The sound is not bad, nothing too tortured in terms of bad grammar or whatever. Americas majesty and 'like shangri-la' are kind of disappointing though.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on blobby blob by MR Blobby 19 Jun 2004, 12:32 PM
I declare MR Blobby to be the most hilarious thing to hit poemeranker since horus8's disastrous epic "AIDS in a crayon".
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Control by MakenzieNy 19 Jun 2004, 12:49 PM
You make some good points, but you fail to realise that society would crumble if men were denied absolute control over their wives. Women are jolly good at kittens and embroidery, and their role as mothers to offspring cannot be overlooked, but when it comes to Important Matters Of The Towne, of which all women remain dangerously ignorant, I'm afraid they're best kept under lock and key. That said, I thought this was an excellent poeme, and at the very least it has given me cause to question my beliefs concerning the weaker sex, even if it hasn't changed them completely. Thanks, -10-
<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 19 Jun 2004, 4:49 PM
A fist full of squelch.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on BLOBBY by MR Blobby 19 Jun 2004, 5:02 PM
lol
sliver on daughter by sarah 19 Jun 2004, 9:06 AM
Being a single parent is tough. My sister is the same(except she has to deal with a boy)Great poem, hang in there!
sliver on Phoebus by SupremeDreamer 19 Jun 2004, 9:10 AM
I hope you didn't write this after reading a few of mine last night! So true, no matter how hard we try, we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write. I think it is unavoidable, kinda like death.
sliver on BLOBBY by MR Blobby 19 Jun 2004, 9:12 AM
A great big ZERO, you will soon be #1 on the worst poem list.
sliver on A single day by donmiguel1960 19 Jun 2004, 9:16 AM
Death can't be thwarted? other than that, 10, definitely.
DR Limerick on On the Discovery of Simple Sam and A Russian Catastrophe by MacFrantic 19 Jun 2004, 9:52 AM
YES GOOD LIMERICK LIKE IT!!!!