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Prince of Void on ……………………………………. by Prince of Void 7 Feb 2005, 11:07 AM
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zodiac on a scene in american ghetto by cowmoo 7 Feb 2005, 12:45 AM
"beakniks" - Great.
Dovina on Lust, and the Sad Soul by woodstock20000 7 Feb 2005, 1:31 PM
Verse 2 is good because it first presumes an imortal soul, then with the word "would" casts doubt. Verse 3 is weak, for the cliche "to and fro," and for its bland wording.
Dovina on Sins of your father by poodietat 7 Feb 2005, 1:45 PM
Almost too direct and pointed to be called a poem. Still, you got the point accross loudly. Not bad.
jroday on Separation by Dovina 7 Feb 2005, 2:59 PM
"Ye can not drink the cup of the Lord, and the cup of devils: ye can not be partakers of the Lord's table, and of the devils." A doubleminded man is unstable." I love the beginning of verse two--Revelations
Mister Cakes on Nuculer Power by MacFrantic 7 Feb 2005, 3:37 PM
Shit
Mister Cakes on Ann & Dan & I by Goad 7 Feb 2005, 3:38 PM
Not what i expected
Mister Cakes on some deleted poem 7 Feb 2005, 3:39 PM
Life is too short for this shit
Mister Cakes on An intolerable rash brother by Crakyamuni 7 Feb 2005, 3:46 PM
great
al-naafiysh on Separation by Dovina 7 Feb 2005, 3:49 PM
Love the poem!
some deleted user on WAIT UNTIL THE END by celticskatermatt1 7 Feb 2005, 6:21 PM
this is pretty good
some deleted user on WAIT UNTIL THE END by celticskatermatt1 7 Feb 2005, 6:22 PM
this is pretty good
some deleted user on WAIT UNTIL THE END by celticskatermatt1 7 Feb 2005, 6:22 PM
this is pretty good
MacFrantic on Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes 7 Feb 2005, 7:29 PM
it seems that you put about 2 seconds of thought into your poems. And that is not a compliment. *6*
MacFrantic on Provision by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 7:34 PM
somewhat decent *8*
sliver on Weary by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:26 PM
Yea, I feel it too. What can ya' do?
sliver on Provision by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:29 PM
Trapped in the same circle as the rest of us, I see. Welome to the other side of humanity.
sliver on Back Off by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:32 PM
This one just feels kind of stilted, for lack of a better word. Maybe choppy, no. well, I ramble. Perhaps just a bit smoother? Or... maybe it's just me, what the hell do I know.
sliver on The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry 7 Feb 2005, 10:41 PM
I am at a loss for words. I love the way you mixed it all up, And painted such a picture.
SupremeDreamer on a scene in american ghetto by cowmoo 8 Feb 2005, 12:27 AM
I'd call this a very rough draft, with a very disappointing ending. Time to edit boy. Six.