regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.166.37.185	15-Jun-05/6:59 PM
I did critique your stuff. What you seem to be saying is that if I have nothing nice to say about the crap you write or am unwilling to write it for you, to keep my opinion to myself. There is no improvement you can make on this crap. You are self-delusional. You are bad. Your 'poems' are bad. I will tell you this each time you post crap. Write good stuff, I give you a higher vote. You are so far below the zero line now that I doubt you can do it.
Re: Impeccable mess by sk8rs_rule_all	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	15-Jun-05/7:08 PM
A textform as massive as a granite block. So popular, these days. So easy to write, too. >>I was once torn and you helped me<< >>I reach for the rope looking for a way out and you pulled me through<< No further comment.
Re: The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	15-Jun-05/7:14 PM
At the end I'm dying for a No. The poem in itself is not a bad idea and the phrasing is decorative.
Re: The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	Gaiadok 69.61.226.6	15-Jun-05/7:18 PM
Hmmm... I rather liked that actually. I believe the questions and yes answer got a bit repetitive, but I can see that was kind of the point as well. Perhaps there is a way to cut down on it? But, anyway, good job.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.166.37.185	15-Jun-05/7:44 PM
I refer you to my comments. I told you begging is pathetic. A critique is....cri•tique Audio pronunciation of "critique" ( P ) Pronunciation Key (kr-tk) n. 1. A critical review or commentary, especially one dealing with works of art or literature. 2. A critical discussion of a specified topic. 3. The art of criticism. You only want to be petted. petted petted petted I will not sully my metaphorical hand. It does not matter how many people have a wrong opinion. I.E., it does not matter how many people think you are pretty or think this crap is poetry or that you are even a nice person. What matters is that I think you are a self-delusional narcissistic child. You seem to think that you have attained maturity. Pretty funny idea. Well, fondle yourself enough and….. you know how the story goes!
Re: Auto-bio Poem by sacred_poet_me	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	15-Jun-05/7:48 PM
Descriptive and imaginative. Great. -8-
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.166.37.185	15-Jun-05/8:47 PM
I do not take orders. Stop Whining! Write something decent, read some other post, rate somebody or do something creative. Begging me to treat you as you desire to be treated is rather retarded behavior. There is something fundamentally wrong with you.
Re: The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	Gaiadok 69.61.226.6	15-Jun-05/8:52 PM
Perhaps there are a few that can be simplified into each other, but then again, maybe not. Maybe I just don't like the style as much as I do others, I'm not quite sure. Try reading it with thoughts of how to bring personalities together maybe? Or compare the personalities, instead of questioning each one individually. Your call
Re: The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244	15-Jun-05/9:38 PM
I love the repetition of the question and the yes. Also you've described each of autumn's personality really well. I think you deserve a -9-
Re: Beach Volleyball by lil_evil_boi	sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244	15-Jun-05/9:40 PM
I dont know what to give you here. I think this poem is too simple and I think it needs more creativity. So I'll give you a 5. Not bad not good.
Re: Yellow Am I by lil_evil_boi	sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244	15-Jun-05/9:42 PM
You make yellow sound so holy and powerful. Why did you choose yellow? Just out of curiosity. BTW...-8-
Re: Between the Edges by woodstock20000	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.90	15-Jun-05/11:40 PM
Quite nice imagery/thoughts but as a poem it lacks, at least for me, that special something that elevates the language beyong prose.
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 172.202.251.107	16-Jun-05/1:26 AM
can the poems we post be whores?
Re: Sisyphus' wife by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	16-Jun-05/4:13 AM
Shouldn't that be Sisyphus's Wife? If not, my 'Doris's off-day' needs a title revision... This poem? Totally incomprehensive to me.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.166.37.185	16-Jun-05/6:50 AM
My only loss is having had to read your crap. I have to read it because you post it. There are no points to be made. If you can't write poetry, rate poetry, read poetry...WHY ARE YOU HERE? You are very stupid. I was willing to merely zero out your crap. All you want to do is sit in you shitty diaper and say how sweet you smell. Well, sit there and smell your shit. Enjoy it. It will not change. What a waste you are.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.166.37.185	16-Jun-05/6:51 AM
This is crap.
Re: Don't be gay by wCUNTw	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.221	16-Jun-05/8:14 AM
If you feel up Perry Como Then you are a Necro-homo.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.221	16-Jun-05/8:26 AM
Judas did his job as did Job.
Re: Auto-bio Poem by sacred_poet_me	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.221	16-Jun-05/8:28 AM
How are things at Michael Jackson's place these days?
Re: The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.221	16-Jun-05/8:30 AM
We have no Autumn where I live. Thanks for the images.