I did critique your stuff. What you seem to be saying is that if I have nothing nice to say about the crap you write or am unwilling to write it for you, to keep my opinion to myself. There is no improvement you can make on this crap. You are self-delusional. You are bad. Your 'poems' are bad. I will tell you this each time you post crap. Write good stuff, I give you a higher vote. You are so far below the zero line now that I doubt you can do it.

Descriptive and imaginative. Great. -8-

can the poems we post be whores?

My only loss is having had to read your crap. I have to read it because you post it. There are no points to be made. If you can't write poetry, rate poetry, read poetry...WHY ARE YOU HERE? You are very stupid. I was willing to merely zero out your crap. All you want to do is sit in you shitty diaper and say how sweet you smell. Well, sit there and smell your shit. Enjoy it. It will not change. What a waste you are.

This is crap.

A textform as massive as a granite block. So popular, these days. So easy to write, too. >>I was once torn and you helped me<< >>I reach for the rope looking for a way out and you pulled me through<< No further comment.

At the end I'm dying for a No. The poem in itself is not a bad idea and the phrasing is decorative.

Hmmm... I rather liked that actually. I believe the questions and yes answer got a bit repetitive, but I can see that was kind of the point as well. Perhaps there is a way to cut down on it? But, anyway, good job.

I refer you to my comments. I told you begging is pathetic. A critique is....cri•tique Audio pronunciation of "critique" ( P ) Pronunciation Key (kr-tk) n. 1. A critical review or commentary, especially one dealing with works of art or literature. 2. A critical discussion of a specified topic. 3. The art of criticism. You only want to be petted. petted petted petted I will not sully my metaphorical hand. It does not matter how many people have a wrong opinion. I.E., it does not matter how many people think you are pretty or think this crap is poetry or that you are even a nice person. What matters is that I think you are a self-delusional narcissistic child. You seem to think that you have attained maturity. Pretty funny idea. Well, fondle yourself enough and….. you know how the story goes!

I do not take orders. Stop Whining! Write something decent, read some other post, rate somebody or do something creative. Begging me to treat you as you desire to be treated is rather retarded behavior. There is something fundamentally wrong with you.

Perhaps there are a few that can be simplified into each other, but then again, maybe not. Maybe I just don't like the style as much as I do others, I'm not quite sure. Try reading it with thoughts of how to bring personalities together maybe? Or compare the personalities, instead of questioning each one individually. Your call

I love the repetition of the question and the yes. Also you've described each of autumn's personality really well. I think you deserve a -9-

I dont know what to give you here. I think this poem is too simple and I think it needs more creativity. So I'll give you a 5. Not bad not good.

You make yellow sound so holy and powerful. Why did you choose yellow? Just out of curiosity. BTW...-8-

Quite nice imagery/thoughts but as a poem it lacks, at least for me, that special something that elevates the language beyong prose.

Shouldn't that be Sisyphus's Wife? If not, my 'Doris's off-day' needs a title revision... This poem? Totally incomprehensive to me.

If you feel up Perry Como Then you are a Necro-homo.

Judas did his job as did Job.

How are things at Michael Jackson's place these days?

We have no Autumn where I live. Thanks for the images.