great subtle rhyme.

Issues with issues. I hate it when that happens. Take care of yourself,eh?

For your sake, I hope you're not referring to one of the many scams like poetry.com which seek to exploit the gullible and talentless. Your poetry sucks. 10!

don't go, oh subject of this poem - this place needs more people who aren't rude. It has a good premise, and a great execution - we just need a broader audience.

Seriously poetry.com is a scam. This is probably the most gently leaving rant ever

Yes, you can probably measure the intolerance of a people by how pious they are when they are wronged.

Oh man, I hardly ever get to tick the leaving rant box. This is almost certainly the poeme with the highest mediocrity score of all time. Sir, I pull down my trousers and salute you. 30F137A3 http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.jsp?action=decode&thecode=30F137A3 [_] AABB rhyming scheme [_] Arbitrary indentation [X] Arbitrary line breaks [X] Clerical errors [_] Ellipses used overabundantly [_] Lower case only [_] Internet shorthand / emoticons [_] Repetition of a word or phrase ad nauseam [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of other linguistic embellishments (alliteration, etc) [X] Devoid of other literary devices (metaphor, synaesthesia, etc) [X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [_] About drugs [_] About romantic love [_] About suicide or self-mutilation [X] About writing [_] Cliched imagery (tears falling like rain, angel in heaven) [_] Cliched rhymes (love/above, heart/apart) [X] Sounds like dialogue in a fantasy novel [X] Melodramatic [_] Autobiographical but in the third person [X] Concerns the author's social pastimes [X] Leaving rant [X] Vicarious wish fulfilment [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Smugly-named protagonist [X] Sanctimonious [_] Untitled [_] Gushingly religious [_] Obsessed with femininity [X] Rage against the machine [X] Self-obsessed -16- P.S. You are a talentless nobody, and your poetic career will never amount to anything more than self-published anthologies of self-obsessed wide-eyed wondrous drivel that you foist on apathetic relatives. Plus you're a grotesquely ugly freak. Thanks!

El Stupido

oh god. My head hurts. Three stanzas and I would have liked it just fine - I might have even repeated it to *myself* a hundred times after - cuz it's catchy. Now I just want to take a pill and hope it goes away.

LoL - very funny. five seven then five do you need an abacus? I counted this thrice.

I obsolve thee. Go with God my bun.

Swit.

LOL! as soon as I got to "frases" I colapsed In mad dribble. I'm sorry I stopped there. Take this 10! and give your pussy the attention that it needs. LOLTTMFM! YAR!

i'm just lovin this -10-

Good.

tell me this poem is sarcastic...but what the hell i just punched in the code anyway... http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.jsp?action=decode&thecode=10B19481

your topic is refreshing

Wow?! 0.

Wow, Scared to comment for fear of appearin' racist. Remember the Alamo? Another brilliant sculpture. Tell me what you think of my latest eh?

My ribs confine just such a weak vessle also. Sucks