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sweet surrender (Free verse) by francis nor capule if i could touch and kiss you only in my dreams
then i never want to wake up
i'll probably just stay here in eternal bliss
and kiss you over and over
but dreams are made
in fact it might be soon
a time will come for you and me
to finally be together
i'd be beside you, i hope you smile
and whisper sweet nothings to my ear
as i assure you that i never would leave
never , again, never
might i add that dreams were made to be realized
not kept, locked up, like a princess in a fairy tale
and that we have a choice
always, and forever
to either be apart
or in sweet solitude's surrender
Up the ladder:
missing pieces
Down the ladder:
untitled Rubiyat 1
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Posted: April 26, 2004 6:35 AM PDT; Last modified: June 11, 2004 5:09 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.642391 Overall Rank: 12373 Comments:
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deleted user @ 68.66.196.168
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26-Apr-04/7:34 AM
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A great thought. Just don't send it to him! This kinda stuff drives 'em off. You've got to trust me on this.
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wilco @ 24.176.102.131
> deleted user
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26-Apr-04/12:44 PM
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Truth.
I laughed so hard as I read this that I soiled my new pair of Thomas Pink boxer shorts and have had to dispose of them out of the window in the loo!
Thanks! -10-
you said "dreams are to be realized" then added it again.
How is this a poem? Are you a mental retard?
If you re-post this an infinite number of times to be read by an infinite number of retards, do you suppose you'll eventually hit on a group that doesn't mind how your title's entirely copped from Sarah Maclachlan?
No, wait, I see now. You hadn't even thought of that song, you just happen to think that surrender is sweet. Bow'ls to you, francis. Bow'ls and bow'ls. 188 view(s)
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