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sweet surrender (Free verse) by francis nor capule

if i could touch and kiss you only in my dreams then i never want to wake up i'll probably just stay here in eternal bliss and kiss you over and over but dreams are made in fact it might be soon a time will come for you and me to finally be together i'd be beside you, i hope you smile and whisper sweet nothings to my ear as i assure you that i never would leave never , again, never might i add that dreams were made to be realized not kept, locked up, like a princess in a fairy tale and that we have a choice always, and forever to either be apart or in sweet solitude's surrender

god'swife 11-Jun-04/8:57 AM
How is this a poem? Are you a mental retard?




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