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Sound of Snow Falling (Haiku) by Aidaho Sound of snow falling.
The sorrow of heart has wings.
I watch as it soars.
Up the ladder:
You love it.
Down the ladder:
Death and the Non-Scanning Poem
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Posted: April 14, 2002 11:06 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2002 11:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0426965 Overall Rank: 7009 Comments:
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anonymous @ 62.254.32.4
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19-May-02/12:41 AM
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nice moment, but a tad self-indulgent. too much drama, not enough base dynamic to contain it
This snow is yellow and melting quickly.
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