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Sound of Snow Falling (Haiku) by Aidaho

Sound of snow falling. The sorrow of heart has wings. I watch as it soars.

anonymous 19-May-02/12:41 AM
nice moment, but a tad self-indulgent. too much drama, not enough base dynamic to contain it




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