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In crowd (Free verse) by That One I wish
I was
part of
the
in
crowd
Up the ladder:
Recherche Collision
Down the ladder:
Six deaths
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Posted: February 8, 2004 7:55 PM PST; Last modified: February 8, 2004 7:55 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1986713 Overall Rank: 4600 Comments:
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wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253
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9-Feb-04/6:30 AM
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If you remove the pointless gaps and the arbitrary line breaks, you end up with the following sentence: "I wish I was part of the in crowd." And that's not a poem; it's just a moronic sentiment. Well done! -10-
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