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HURRICANE! (Free verse) by jroday
I travel from sea to land with no destination in mind. Having no favorite place to adventure,traveling freely at my own speed. Aroma is not a factor to the path I take.therefore I'm a natural. Tracking my location is easy,controlling me is impossible. causing major disruption and destruction, from my journeys about the land.moving heavy objects without lifting a hand. Forming many surges which you call bands.creating loud roaring sounds, with heavy gust of wind and rain. I can destroy your truck! your car! and even your home. at the blink of my eye, I'll be gone.leaveing death and pain where every I go. Never the less I'm dangerous and unpredictable. I've had so many different names, but my devastations remain the same. Only mother nature gives me my commands.that's something you must understand.

Down the ladder: "oh"

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4580
Posted: September 29, 2004 6:42 AM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2004 6:42 AM PDT
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[10] blacksoul @ 204.215.33.229 | 30-Dec-04/10:55 AM | Reply
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