poemranker ::HURRICANE! by jroday

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HURRICANE!

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Sep 2004 · 1 comment

I travel from sea to land with no destination in mind. Having no favorite place to adventure,traveling freely at my own speed. Aroma is not a factor to the path I take.therefore I'm a natural. Tracking my location is easy,controlling me is impossible. causing major disruption and destruction, from my journeys about the land.moving heavy objects without lifting a hand. Forming many surges which you call bands.creating loud roaring sounds, with heavy gust of wind and rain. I can destroy your truck! your car! and even your home. at the blink of my eye, I'll be gone.leaveing death and pain where every I go. Never the less I'm dangerous and unpredictable. I've had so many different names, but my devastations remain the same. Only mother nature gives me my commands.that's something you must understand.

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[10] blacksoul 30-Dec-04/10:55 AM Reply
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