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In crowd (Free verse) by That One

I wish I was part of the in crowd

Fraser Allonby Q.C. 9-Feb-04/6:30 AM
If you remove the pointless gaps and the arbitrary line breaks, you end up with the following sentence: "I wish I was part of the in crowd." And that's not a poem; it's just a moronic sentiment. Well done! -10-




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