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bitch (Other) by kthulah
what to do about the woman who knows not her place we have tried so hard to teach her yet she budges not is her concern not with our will her fate in our hands if not her fate perhaps her faith does she not fear us of what sturdy stuff were the men in her life before what greatness or accursedness causes but a sigh is sigh a sign of arrogance what pride could she claim can she not see us above her she is looking up what stars live in this woman's sky that outshine our glare and what darkness covers her soul diffusing our wrath we pummel her with all our might our fists bleed from it she does fall and we do kick her until our shoes tear and when it is over she stands brushes off her clothes but the only blood upon her is from our own hands perhaps it is stupidity everyone knows us everyone knows we are the man except this woman oh god there are more

Up the ladder: Pride
Down the ladder: Invitation to Seduction

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.0672355
Overall Rank: 6639
Posted: August 8, 2002 4:44 AM PDT; Last modified: August 8, 2002 4:44 AM PDT
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[9] razorgrin @ 142.166.106.253 | 8-Aug-02/6:10 AM | Reply
cool.
[9] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 | 8-Aug-02/7:09 AM | Reply
this is bizarre and interesting. a look at (and satire of) misogyny from the inside? i'm probably reading it wrong, but i like it just the same.
[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 8-Aug-02/7:13 AM | Reply
indeed. nice job.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Aug-02/11:36 AM | Reply
if you want the blood of the bitch..pull on tampon string..then push down on eyelid number three...there..she's bleeding now..if run into any more of these bloodless mutants... fear not..their bark is their bite..for they are the sleeves of Eve' lacking the properly pitched vibtato in g#
[n/a] kthulah @ | 23-Aug-02/5:01 AM | Reply
Balthazar, you read it right. The funniest part is that this is based on things guys have actually said to me.
"You need to be put in your place," and such...as if we are not all where we are already.
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 213.253.24.101 | 10-Oct-03/3:29 AM | Reply
What?
[4] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Oct-03/5:41 PM | Reply
A case of internal chicken pox and no bus fare.
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