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Free verse № 57785

An Enviable Task

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Jul 2003 · 4 comments

I have navigated the indeterminable Bleakness of your soul and mapped its Craggy, desolate entirety. I have strived towards the fragments Of dischord that litter your mind And composed from them a symphony. I have struggled in battles with Demons in your head, and from the Ensuing melee drawn beauty. I have plunged deep into the abyss That is your heart and bought back the Last vessels of your morality. And after that, as easily as water Pours from a cup, you draw away from me.

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4 comments

[8] SupremeDreamer 27-Jul-03/3:01 PM Reply
Nice work my lil birdie.. missed you. ;) blessed with 8.
[9] horus8 27-Jul-03/3:08 PM Reply
This is good, did you write it?
[n/a] cleverdevice › horus8 29-Jul-03/10:47 AM Reply
that poemwanker award isn't justified, honestly!
[9] Craychus 27-Jul-03/4:59 PM Reply
wow, excellent. 9.