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An Enviable Task (Free verse) by cleverdevice
I have navigated the indeterminable Bleakness of your soul and mapped its Craggy, desolate entirety. I have strived towards the fragments Of dischord that litter your mind And composed from them a symphony. I have struggled in battles with Demons in your head, and from the Ensuing melee drawn beauty. I have plunged deep into the abyss That is your heart and bought back the Last vessels of your morality. And after that, as easily as water Pours from a cup, you draw away from me.

Up the ladder: An Angel's Caress
Down the ladder: A Circle Starts with C

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4274
Posted: July 27, 2003 2:56 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2003 2:56 PM PDT
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[8] SupremeDreamer @ 66.81.156.45 | 27-Jul-03/3:01 PM | Reply
Nice work my lil birdie.. missed you. ;) blessed with 8.
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Jul-03/3:08 PM | Reply
This is good, did you write it?
[n/a] cleverdevice @ 81.131.194.68 > horus8 | 29-Jul-03/10:47 AM | Reply
that poemwanker award isn't justified, honestly!
[9] Craychus @ 218.186.164.168 | 27-Jul-03/4:59 PM | Reply
wow, excellent. 9.
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