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An Enviable Task (Free verse) by cleverdevice
I have navigated the indeterminable
Bleakness of your soul and mapped its
Craggy, desolate entirety.
I have strived towards the fragments
Of dischord that litter your mind
And composed from them a symphony.
I have struggled in battles with
Demons in your head, and from the
Ensuing melee drawn beauty.
I have plunged deep into the abyss
That is your heart and bought back the
Last vessels of your morality.
And after that, as easily as water
Pours from a cup, you draw away from me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4274
Posted: July 27, 2003 2:56 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2003 2:56 PM PDT
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