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Ode № 56908

The Path Untrodden

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Jul 2003 · Edited 26 Jul 2003 · 3 comments

The dark of night can breathless be When two-backed beasts burst forth in bed. Our sleep is banished till the morn: We innocence must mourn instead. The bright of day can breathless be And thoughts a frenzied locust-swarm Of winged ideas and notions blurred. A hunger raw hath stirred a storm. The dark of night can breathless be When avid thirsts again unmet Upset a true attachment strong And longing shapes anew regret. The bright of day can breathless be When lands unknown are travelled through. No goal, our purpose sole to wend: No end but to the end eschew.

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[7] richa 21-Jul-03/6:40 AM Reply
quite good, plenty of varied language and very lyrical
[9] Bachus 26-Jul-03/4:35 PM Reply
mmmm. Indeed.
[9] Craychus 26-Jul-03/9:23 PM Reply
yes, that's the word. lyrical. excellent. 9.