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The Path Untrodden (Ode) by Terence

The dark of night can breathless be When two-backed beasts burst forth in bed. Our sleep is banished till the morn: We innocence must mourn instead. The bright of day can breathless be And thoughts a frenzied locust-swarm Of winged ideas and notions blurred. A hunger raw hath stirred a storm. The dark of night can breathless be When avid thirsts again unmet Upset a true attachment strong And longing shapes anew regret. The bright of day can breathless be When lands unknown are travelled through. No goal, our purpose sole to wend: No end but to the end eschew.

richa 21-Jul-03/6:40 AM
quite good, plenty of varied language and very lyrical




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