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breathtaking (Free verse) by j_beckfield breath taking
soul breaking
can't see the fool I'm making
hurts to sigh
as my insides die
unrequited makes me cry
someone, somewhere makes your heart sing
oh what I'd give to be him
Up the ladder:
ALIVE
Down the ladder:
Daisies
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Posted: July 18, 2002 4:24 AM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2002 4:24 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.3276463 Overall Rank: 13094 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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29-Jul-02/12:31 AM
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You bring the lipstick i'll bring my arse. get some frickin self esteem.Freud is crawling out of the grave currently. to piece your dilema back together(zombie, cocaine, shrink). then. I. put beak. in you.ASL.. p.s if you clip your mooseknuckle it will grow bigger and stronger. good luck.e
Yes, you are fool making with this poetic ditty.
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