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breathtaking

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

breath taking soul breaking can't see the fool I'm making hurts to sigh as my insides die unrequited makes me cry someone, somewhere makes your heart sing oh what I'd give to be him

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[5] horus8 29-Jul-02/12:31 AM Reply

You bring the lipstick i'll bring my arse. get some frickin self esteem.Freud is crawling out of the grave currently. to piece your dilema back together(zombie, cocaine, shrink). then. I. put beak. in you.ASL.. p.s if you clip your mooseknuckle it will grow bigger and stronger. good luck.e

[0] poetandknowit 20-Aug-02/3:07 PM Reply

Yes, you are fool making with this poetic ditty.