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breathtaking (Free verse) by j_beckfield

breath taking soul breaking can't see the fool I'm making hurts to sigh as my insides die unrequited makes me cry someone, somewhere makes your heart sing oh what I'd give to be him

horus8 29-Jul-02/12:31 AM
You bring the lipstick i'll bring my arse. get some frickin self esteem.Freud is crawling out of the grave currently. to piece your dilema back together(zombie, cocaine, shrink). then. I. put beak. in you.ASL.. p.s if you clip your mooseknuckle it will grow bigger and stronger. good luck.e




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