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breathtaking (Free verse) by j_beckfield

breath taking soul breaking can't see the fool I'm making hurts to sigh as my insides die unrequited makes me cry someone, somewhere makes your heart sing oh what I'd give to be him

poetandknowit 20-Aug-02/3:07 PM
Yes, you are fool making with this poetic ditty.




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