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<Haiku> (Haiku) by Entelechist
Sips of enchantment Statuesque and beautiful Unquenchable thirst
Up the ladder: Spring Rolls
Down the ladder: One Night Stand
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5555553
Weighted score: 5.7777777
Overall Rank: 1727
Posted: May 25, 2003 10:46 AM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2003 10:46 AM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-May-03/1:04 PM | Reply
Hole-some.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23 | 26-May-03/4:53 PM | Reply
-=Haiku=- (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=-

Beauty, wonderment,
Feeling, emotion, truth, love,
Magical forest.
[n/a] Entelechist @ 212.159.33.247 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 27-May-03/3:47 PM | Reply
Dark_Angel you belie you moniker. I like this, but the middle line lacks movement which single words
convey......but this is a minor point. Great stuff.
[5] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.80 | 12-Jun-03/5:14 AM | Reply
search for something more palpable and less ordinary.
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