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Haiku № 50236

<Haiku>

by Entelechist

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 May 2003 · 4 comments

Sips of enchantment Statuesque and beautiful Unquenchable thirst

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4 comments

[7] horus8 26-May-03/1:04 PM Reply
Hole-some.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-May-03/4:53 PM Reply
-=Haiku=- (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=-

Beauty, wonderment,
Feeling, emotion, truth, love,
Magical forest.
[n/a] Entelechist › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-May-03/3:47 PM Reply
Dark_Angel you belie you moniker. I like this, but the middle line lacks movement which single words
convey......but this is a minor point. Great stuff.
[5] Robert K Foster 12-Jun-03/5:14 AM Reply
search for something more palpable and less ordinary.