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<Haiku> (Haiku) by Entelechist

Sips of enchantment Statuesque and beautiful Unquenchable thirst

Entelechist 27-May-03/3:47 PM
Dark_Angel you belie you moniker. I like this, but the middle line lacks movement which single words
convey......but this is a minor point. Great stuff.




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