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Deconstructing the american dream (Free verse) by Nice guy
No. I will not. It does not suit my blood or my bloodlines, any longer. For centuries you have demanded fatigue, while you grin in your faux skin. "You made the choice" Then I will un-choose, and herald your collapse! Your trinkets can never, will never, have never sheltered me, myself or I. Fighting, while backed into a corner, has proven a lesson in futility. Now, I will walk away in silence, leaving my message of absence.

Up the ladder: Offence
Down the ladder: Silent

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10641
Posted: April 8, 2003 2:38 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2003 2:38 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Apr-03/3:09 PM | Reply
ha ha! lol.

Sounds like the new Mcdonalds jingle, or Yuban coffee song.
[n/a] Nice guy @ 152.163.188.7 > Bachus | 8-Apr-03/3:14 PM | Reply
Absolutely correct!! how astute.
[1] asimpleman @ 202.141.239.129 | 9-Apr-03/6:35 AM | Reply
Good thing u realised u never did have the 'fight' in u.......1
[n/a] Nice guy @ 64.12.96.139 > asimpleman | 9-Apr-03/7:36 AM | Reply
you haven't the slightest clue.
[n/a] CHRMEcountryGRL @ 205.188.209.8 | 21-Apr-03/8:10 PM | Reply
And I liked this one better than the first...
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