poemranker ::Silent by elizabethann

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Free verse № 47088

Silent

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Apr 2003 · 0 comments

Eyes closed Steady breath No more fear left Silent tears No longer strip away innocence No more pain inside A reassurance that we'll survive Through his memory We'll go on And in the early morning When we miss him the most Breathe steady and hold him close.

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