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Silent (Free verse) by elizabethann
Eyes closed
Steady breath
No more fear left
Silent tears
No longer strip away innocence
No more pain inside
A reassurance that we'll survive
Through his memory
We'll go on
And in the early morning
When we miss him the most
Breathe steady and hold him
close.
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Posted: April 12, 2003 1:56 PM PDT; Last modified: April 12, 2003 1:56 PM PDT
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