Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Gravity (Free verse) by RichardH
Gravity I feel like an apple and you feel like Newton, watching my fall, observing gravity, making calculations on the tide, and, at the moment that I, the apple still falling, know that my life is over at the end of this last trajectory, you catch me, and you hold me, and you look at me as if I held an answer to an important question that still needs to be asked. Richard Harrison

Up the ladder: Harry the Moon
Down the ladder: This Strange Feeling

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 12
.. 00
.. 00
.. 11
.. 10
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 11

Arithmetic Mean: 4.9
Weighted score: 4.95
Overall Rank: 8978
Posted: July 11, 2002 6:57 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 6:57 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[9] deleted user @ 152.163.188.229 | 13-Jul-02/4:01 PM | Reply
Great poem. And should ye possess the answer to my query, I, unlike Eve, vow not to "bite"...but rather shall simply "breathe deeply".
[1] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Aug-02/8:24 PM | Reply
Where do babies come from? Utah!
116 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001