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Foolish (Free verse) by AmberNicole Falling in love with you
Was not something I wanted to do
I should have known to stay away
And told that little girl not to play.
I should have known that men like you
Would only break my heart in two
That men like you were uncapable of
Expressing anything to do with love.
Like a snake, you stole my love
And made me believe you were sent from above.
Then you laughed at my trusting ways
And said,"Women are quite the fools these days."
To think I ever gave my heart to you
Makes me angry; but not at you.
I hate myself for coming undone
And having nothing to do but run.
But someday you'll see
It'll happen to you
And you'll write the poem
Of the girl who screwed you.
Up the ladder:
Emergency
Down the ladder:
Truckers should not be poets
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Posted: February 15, 2003 9:32 PM PST; Last modified: February 15, 2003 9:35 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.166884 Overall Rank: 4990 Comments:
i have never met a snake that stole anything except for maybe a mouse's life. Perhaps you should just get the fucke out of the garden and call it a day. And by the way give me back my rib bitche or start paying rent on it. Years of bad cooking and boring sexual positions, and you're still not happy with my total ruinment (new worde)? tsk. Women... the nerve.
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your metaphors are exhausted.