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My bedtime story (Free verse) by famenglory
Read me another bedtime story About a princess and a dragon And the knight in shining armor Who came to save her So that he could rape and abuse The beautiful princess Because fairytales tell no ending And then they both go to his kingdom (don't they daddy?) Where he knocks her up She dies in childbirth (I miss you mommy) He becomes a drunk And now does to the child as he did to its mother Wait, thats not a bedtime story There are no princesses or dragons Only the knight whose shiny armor got quite rusty

Up the ladder: myself
Down the ladder: Mens Cocks Have No Style

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7584
Posted: January 26, 2003 7:18 PM PST; Last modified: January 26, 2003 7:18 PM PST
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Comments:
[9] deleted user @ 68.82.229.248 | 26-Jan-03/7:27 PM | Reply
Very creative, I like it
[4] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-Jan-03/8:47 PM | Reply
very creative? If creativity could be bottled..your bottle would be a paper office cup.
[n/a] famenglory @ 151.205.198.32 > horus8 | 27-Jan-03/12:26 PM | Reply
haha... an office cup. one of the cone ones or the ones that slightly resemble a decent glass?
[4] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 27-Jan-03/10:00 AM | Reply
doesn't do it for me. too klunky.
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