I wish

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Jan 2003 · Edited 9 Jan 2003 · 5 comments

I wish I could turn back the hands of time, Turn them back to when we were together When everything was perfect and everything was nice Everything was nice, you could call it perfect Perfect cause you were there You were there with me Now there is nothing left to say Except I wish I could turn back the hands of time Because I think there broken!

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[7] purplestain 5-Jan-03/7:30 AM Reply

this is a nice poem and i can relate to it. however, the last need to read like this...because i think they're broken!

[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Jan-03/6:48 PM Reply

fix the question marks.

[n/a] horus8 6-Jan-03/6:50 PM Reply

"Now there nothing left to say"
Now there is nothing left to say.
try that.

[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Jan-03/5:35 PM Reply

they are.

[4] Tintagiles 29-Sep-03/8:13 PM Reply

Puerilely decent until the last line.