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I wish (Free verse) by trisha

I wish I could turn back the hands of time, Turn them back to when we were together When everything was perfect and everything was nice Everything was nice, you could call it perfect Perfect cause you were there You were there with me Now there is nothing left to say Except I wish I could turn back the hands of time Because I think there broken!

Tintagiles 29-Sep-03/8:13 PM
Puerilely decent until the last line.




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