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Free verse № 32405

steps of pain

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Dec 2002 · 0 comments

as the blade cuts in to my skin i am filled with a felling a feeling of hope hoping that this time, this cut, will be the answer to all my problems as it bleeds its bleeds away my pain the pain i held in for no one to see hiding it behind a fake smile and a "i'm ok" as a scar forms its formed of sorrow and pain the pain is another problem problem i cannot conquer lefted cheated and feeling of emptiness i cry

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