poemranker ::Santa At My Steps by tarik

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Free verse № 30145

Santa At My Steps

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Dec 2002 · 1 comment

Crack! Silence... Woken from Christmas Eve sleep. My heart thuds rapidly echoing through my body. I feel a new presence in the house, But of course! Its Christmas night! Santa Claus is here! Creeping without a sound to peer around the corner, A distant red figure among the shadows, Near the Christmas tree. I stand soundless to gaze at the cherry red silhouette, Swish! Silence... Anxiously looking to the nearby bedroom My sleeping sister stirs in her slumber. I exhale with relief, Glancing back down the moonlit hallway Absence... The shadowed figure is gone. Santa has spotted me, And left. I must get back to sleep! If not, Santa shall not return. I tread swiftly into my bedroom and into my bed. And doze back into the night. Awaiting sunrise. Crack! Silence... My eyelids gradually expose the blue of my eyes. Morning.

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[n/a] savannah 12-May-03/5:53 PM Reply
This is a great poem i think you should exhibit some of your other stuff as well... Your a great writer, i never knew you had stuff on this site. Well i hope you add to your poems id love to read others. ~Savannah~