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Santa At My Steps (Free verse) by tarik
Crack! Silence...
Woken from Christmas Eve sleep.
My heart thuds rapidly echoing through my body.
I feel a new presence in the house,
But of course! Its Christmas night!
Santa Claus is here!
Creeping without a sound to peer around the corner,
A distant red figure among the shadows,
Near the Christmas tree.
I stand soundless to gaze at the cherry red silhouette,
Swish! Silence...
Anxiously looking to the nearby bedroom
My sleeping sister stirs in her slumber.
I exhale with relief,
Glancing back down the moonlit hallway
Absence...
The shadowed figure is gone.
Santa has spotted me,
And left.
I must get back to sleep!
If not,
Santa shall not return.
I tread swiftly into my bedroom and into my bed.
And doze back into the night.
Awaiting sunrise.
Crack! Silence...
My eyelids gradually expose the blue of my eyes.
Morning.
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Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8396
Posted: December 14, 2002 12:11 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2002 12:11 PM PST
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